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Your last one is close but might imply something slightly different. My suggestion: Missing Titanic Sub Once Faced Massive Lawsuit Over Safe Travel Depth
by fn-mote 3y ago
Your last one is close but might imply something slightly different.
My suggestion:
Missing Titanic Sub Once Faced Massive Lawsuit Over Safe Travel Depth
- rcoveson 3y agoThat's pretty good, but keep in mind that it's a headline. Most style guides stipulate alliteration, even at the expense of accuracy and specificity. For example: Sunk Submarine Sued: Design Deadly During Designated Dives
- AlbertCory 3y ago+1 to that. Not because of the (non-existent) rule, but because "depth" is a stronger word than "to." It's almost always better for the last word to have some punch.