I don't want to be too negative about this, but I think they're all too long and tacky. BY23 is no different, but it's the one that makes me cringe the least.

I don't want to be too negative about this, but I think they're all too long and tacky. BY23 is no different, but it's the one that makes me cringe the least. It's simple and less unnecessarily abstract by using the literal sound of a crowd.