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Do you understand the idea of my project by reading my landing page?
- szymonzalarski 3y agoHello, I'm building a side project and launched landing page. I don't want to market my project so I don't describe it here. I would ask you to visit my landing page and give me a feedback whether the landing page is invormative and are you able to get the idea of my project in under 3 seconds? thanks for your time, have a nice week! Best, Szymon
- Hackbraten 3y agoCongrats for your launch! No major issues regarding your pitch if you ask me. One thing I’d suggest for you to add is a definition of ASO on first use. It’s kinda clear from the context, and I can imagine your target audience may know it, but I feel I had to think harder than necessary. Perhaps add a link to a definition on first use of the ASO abbreviation (not counting the AsoGenie brand)? With that out of the way, I’d say I was able to grasp the idea of your pitch within a couple of seconds.
- szymonzalarski 3y agoThank you! You are right, I should add some ASO definition, not every customer will know what exactly ASO is or is not familiar with this term.
- MrVandemar 3y agoWell, I'll hand it to you, I didn't expect to see anything without Javascript turned on. That's great. I think I get your service. You basically look for holes in the competitors SEO?
- szymonzalarski 3y agoHi, thanks for your comment. I analyse competitors SEO (in this case ASO) and using AI I try to create outstanding new one to outrank competitors.
- XCSme 3y agoThe copy looks really good. The imagery could do better, I personally dislike the stock-looking clipart images and would rather have some images actually showing how it works or with the product's UI.
- szymonzalarski 3y agoThank you! I need to change those images to more informative ones or remove them completely.