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This is creative writing. The cards are on the table from the first paragraph: > At smoke shops, customers drive off after blazing up. In motion or at red ligh
by SheinhardtWigCo 3y ago
This is creative writing. The cards are on the table from the first paragraph:
> At smoke shops, customers drive off after blazing up. In motion or at red lights, smoke wafts from car windows, the smell mingling with exhaust fumes in a pungent miasma.
It's the classic formula: invent a conclusion first and make that your headline; spend a few paragraphs painting a visceral picture of your imaginary world; then find 2 or 3 city-dwelling folks who have some tangential and/or non-authoritative opinions on the topic. (The first primary source cited here is a bike messenger, and it doesn't get any better.) Add a bunch of statistics and past incidents that are vaguely related to the topic but not actually indicative of the conclusion. Job done.