You also have to explain: - your concerns about the current status quo, - how these are causing the current status quo and - explain what you believe are the

You also have to explain: - your concerns about the current status quo, - how these are causing the current status quo and - explain what you believe are the expected effects. It's an internet comment, not an academic essay, so you can just refer to things -- but you're in a diverse forum where most people aren't going to instantly recall the established zeitgeist you're trying to evoke. Many of us aren't familiar with your zeitgeist, so sparse references to it mean nothing to us. I have no idea what you mean by "citizenship". I don't know what problems this is causing, what the change would look like, and why that would be expected to improve the problem.