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My suggestion is to try to distill what you do as much as possible. Nowhere in the post or on the landing page do you really state what Spaceship is. Even sayi
by dwynings 15y ago
My suggestion is to try to distill what you do as much as possible. Nowhere in the post or on the landing page do you really state what Spaceship is.
Even saying something like, "Spaceship is a collaborative mind mapping application that supports rich media," would have helped me understand quicker.
- mntmn 15y agoThanks, that was exactly the kind of constructive feedback I was hoping for when posting here.
- Codhisattva 15y agoSo ... could you post here, what it is in summary?
- mntmn 15y agoSure. Please see my separate comment in the main thread.
- JakeOnRails 15y agoI second this. I just skimmed the whole page and I have no idea what spaceship is besides a "tool for designers". After looking at the wall of text on your landing page I had no desire to even start the video. The image for the video is not super compelling either. Good luck! Oh... and... what is it that spaceship does?
- Codhisattva 15y agoDitto. The first paragraph needs to be specific. I read all the way to the tl;dr mark and still don't know what's brewing.