I think your critique would hold a lot more weight if you were precise about (a) what the good/interesting ideas you alluded to are, and (b) where you think thi

I think your critique would hold a lot more weight if you were precise about (a) what the good/interesting ideas you alluded to are, and (b) where you think this article's treatment of class relations breaks down. As it stands, your comment is a rather wordy complaint about tone. What's worse is that half your complaint about style is on behalf of some imagined working class person pressed for time, not even your own opinion!