Apologies if this causes offense, but: you have a single, formidable paragraph with nine questions in it. This is a lot to put on a reader all at once. Consider

Apologies if this causes offense, but: you have a single, formidable paragraph with nine questions in it. This is a lot to put on a reader all at once. Consider breaking it up a bit. That many questions all at once can feel more like an interrogation, while good communication feels like a conversation.