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Hardly convoluted when the sentence states one fact about one night. If it had been written as "These procedures were not followed on just the night he died.",
by ndsipa_pomu 4y ago
Hardly convoluted when the sentence states one fact about one night.
If it had been written as "These procedures were not followed on just the night he died.", then I would agree with you.
- teddyh 4y agoThe insertion of the word “just” would change the sentence from an implication to an explicit statement; there would be no room for ambiguity.