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Thank you, I have updated my post with your corrections. And you are right, I am not a native speaker.

• seiwyn 15y ago
  It is better now, but amusingly - "The other guy is not as well as you, but better with bowling.", in this case it should be "The other guy is not as good as you". Great article, though.
  • grobmeier 15y ago
    Ups - thanks, fixed that too. I was definitely not focused enough. The whole feedback on this post is just overwhelming.
    • bobz 15y ago
      Cheers for taking the time to respond to feedback and learn. Also, props on how strong and well written the English is in general! And, most importantly, loved the article. :) (I thought this whole thread was a good example of how to actually do good feedback. )
      • grobmeier 15y ago
        Thank you for the kind words. It is actually very difficult to estimate if the article is well written or not if you are not using you mother tongue (at least this is how I feel about it). So I consider your comment very motivating!
• AznHisoka 15y ago
  I think the less than perfect grammar makes the piece flow better, and sound more authentic Zen
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