This is a great idea imo and has lots of room to play with. Using git has some interesting repercussions in which branches and revisions and reverts could play

This is a great idea imo and has lots of room to play with. Using git has some interesting repercussions in which branches and revisions and reverts could play a role for someone creative enough to consider it. I imagine a story in which you revisit a previously read section and it is slightly different, with a sort of unreliable narrator aspect. However, I beg you, please consider typography for the sample and other css. I cannot provide better recommendations but the one image was unpleasant to look at. Contrast, color, kerning, font, line height, etc. are very important if the goal is for the work to be read on a phone.