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The second is profoundly better. The first is unpublishable.
by DC-3 3y ago
The second is profoundly better. The first is unpublishable.
- famouswaffles 3y agoUnpublishable ? Huh. I think the second is GPT though neither is unpublishable. i think the first is better for the domain - a novel but the second is more literal. Still though, if you wanted GPT to spit out something like the first or second, you'd only need to ask. "add a literary flair" works (for the first).
- fvdessen 3y agoSecond one is actually the official ! It indeed added some literary flair, but this flair does not have such presence in the original french text, as it is a modern and experimental work of literature.
- simonh 3y agoTo me the second is dull as ditchwater.