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I think it's just this: - Typically, there is an avoidance relationship between a man and his mother-in-law - usually, between a woman and her father-in-law
by khochesh_kushat 4y ago
I think it's just this:
- Typically, there is an avoidance relationship between a man and his mother-in-law
- usually, between a woman and her father-in-law
- sometimes, between any person and their same-sex parent-in-law
Agreed it is written a bit awkwardly.
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- hunter2_ 4y agoYou need to move the first "between" into the first bullet point, lest the second and third points have "between" twice. Unrelated to the visual breakdown, there's also confusion (for me, at least) as to whether the first and second points have equal prominence, or if the second point should be of intermediate prominence; the word "usually" shouldn't be introduced except to slightly diminish, but I consider it to be a synonym of "typically"... are we to think the first is 90% and the second is 90%^2?
- khochesh_kushat 4y agoThanks, edited to move the between.
- hunter2_ 4y agoOops, maybe I wasn't clear, sorry! This is what I was going for... ### Typically, there is an avoidance relationship - between a man and his mother-in-law - usually between a woman and her father-in-law - sometimes between any person and their same-sex parent-in-law ### So the first point is simply typical, the second point is usually typical, and the third point is sometimes typical. The issue I have is not knowing whether the usually+typical construction is redundant or compounding.
- hackernewds 4y agoso rates of instances of avoidance (man + MIL) > (woman + FIL) > (MIL + MIL or FIL + FIL) I don't know still whether it's hinting to this, or simply a figure of speech