Not harsh at all! I appreciate any and all feedback. I want to test the model, and doing it myself is a great way of doing so. (so far it's working!) I agree

Not harsh at all! I appreciate any and all feedback. I want to test the model, and doing it myself is a great way of doing so. (so far it's working!) I agree about the conversation, but I think the great thing about the web is that the line that separates a 'story' and a 'conversation' is blurring. I think this experiment will lead to a very compelling version of both. Wish me luck!