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No but I re-read that sentence three times because of how poorly it was written. I don't think I've ever read a news article where a quoted person's description
by joshuahedlund 15y ago
No but I re-read that sentence three times because of how poorly it was written. I don't think I've ever read a news article where a quoted person's description bridged two facts with the phrase "and before that".
- oconnore 15y ago<Exclamation>, said <identity and credentials>. "<Explanation>". I don't see anything wrong with that.
- joshuahedlund 15y agoYes, that is standard. This is just redundant and sounds like a run-on: <Exclamation>, said <identity and credentials and before that other credentials>. "<Explanation>".