Hey - not at all thats really useful feedback! I know it needs a lot of work, and I struggled to find a track. It needs a story element. At the moment I just

Hey - not at all thats really useful feedback! I know it needs a lot of work, and I struggled to find a track. It needs a story element. At the moment I just wanted something to show the process of making a plan. The link you provided is really useful - I'll start working on the next iteration.