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I've asked ChatGPT to write an ode to the beer. This was the result: An ode to the frothy brew, The one that's crisp and true, A beer that's cool and lig
by pajko 4y ago
I've asked ChatGPT to write an ode to the beer. This was the result:
An ode to the frothy brew,
The one that's crisp and true,
A beer that's cool and light,
The perfect drink for a summer's night.
With every sip, a burst of hops,
A refreshing taste that never stops,
The gentle fizz, the golden hue,
A symphony of flavors brewed just for you.
Whether you're at a party or alone,
A refreshing beer is like coming home,
It's familiar and comforting, calming and pure,
A tonic for the soul that's simply pure.
So let's raise a glass to the brew,
The lager or ale, your favorite or new,
For no matter the type or brand,
A refreshing beer is always grand.
- danielbln 4y agoI asked GPT-4 to take this ode and make it rhyme better, and to make it more clever and beautiful: A sonnet to the effervescent ale, The potion crisp, sincere, and hale, A quaff that's chilled and full of light, The ambrosia for a summer's twilight. With every draught, a surge of hop, A zestful taste that will not stop, The subtle fizz, the amber glow, A panoply of notes that flow. In festive throngs or solitaire, A bracing brew brings comfort there, It's known and soothing, mending, clear, A balm for hearts, a joy austere. So let's extol the sudsy cheer, The stout or porter, far or near, For in each varied draft or blend, A lively beer shall ever mend.
- groestl 4y agoI read that with a British accent and was delighted when I reached this line: "In festive throngs or solitaire, A bracing brew brings comfort there, It's known and soothing, mending, clear, A balm for hearts, a joy austere." Reminded me of a way historians find out how written text was spoken (namely by looking at what supposedly rhymes or onomatopoeic words and letters).
- danielbln 4y agoYou'll enjoy this AI generated spoken version: https://on.soundcloud.com/1tHgY https://on.soundcloud.com/1tHgY
- recuter 4y agoHo! Ho! Ho! to the bottle I go To heal my heart and drown my woe. Rain may fall and wind may blow, And many miles be still to go, But under a tall tree I will lie, And let the clouds go sailing by.
- ishvanl 4y agoI think this example really illustrates the leaps and bounds made between [Chat]GPT-3 & GPT-4. The first text sounds like some slightly shoddy marketing copy, or perhaps a high schooler's C-minus attempt at a creative writing class, but if you told me that the second text was an extract from a Tolkien novel, I'd probably believe you.
- jsemrau 4y agoQuite interesting if you think about this not as a marketing jingle but as Art. Contrast it to Poe's Beer Poem "Lines". What does it say about humanity and their ability to create wonderful things? Does it change ? The beauty of poetry is finding the meaning hidden in the rhymes and verses. Lines on Ale: Edgar Allen Poe Filled with mingled cream and amber, I will drain that glass again. Such hilarious visions clamber Through the chamber of my brain. Quaintest thoughts, queerest fancies Come to life and fade away. What care I how time advances; I am drinking ale today.
- emmelaich 4y agoYou're right. The gpt-4 poem is good[0], but is formulaic doggerel compared to Poe. [0] Very good for a non-human.