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First of all, I'm not currently a manager, but I think your website is great; it definitely demonstrates that you have real skills and could be productive as a
by anonXae8ip7r 4y ago
First of all, I'm not currently a manager, but I think your website is great; it definitely demonstrates that you have real skills and could be productive as a junior-level developer. So I'll focus on the resume, where I see a few things that could be improved:
- You mentioned that you've worked automotive jobs with some technical aspects. I would strongly consider listing those jobs, even if they don't include any software experience. They still demonstrate a lot of things that managers are looking for: work ethic, conscientousness, general technical ability and intelligence, motivation, and so forth. And for HR screeners, they eliminate resume gap concerns.
- More broadly, I'd try to make sure that your resume tells a clear story of what you've been doing in recent years. A progression of technically oriented automotive work to a UC Berkeley extension program to a portfolio of working software projects is a great story, but someone skimming over your resume for five seconds might not see that story. They might just notice a smattering of disconnected dates and wonder if you've been in prison, or fired from a succession of short-term software jobs, or sitting at home watching TV. (And if any of that does apply to you, I don't mean to discourage you. But one way or another, I'd focus on structuring your resume to tell a clear story.)
- I'd add something below the UC Berkeley heading to make clear that you were enrolled in an extension program rather than a degree-seeking program. Otherwise, someone might think that you enrolled for a semester or dropped out, or that you're trying to make an extension course look like something more. And if you completed the program and got some sort of certificate, you might want to make that explicit, to demonstrate persistence and follow-through.
- I'd rewrite the summary statement to focus on your story without anything buzzwordy (like "on time and under budget" and "agile"). The key points I'd include are: 1) you've done professional, serious work as an adult; 2) you're making a transition into software; and 3) you've completed a UC Berkeley extension program and a number of projects and thus have demonstrable knowledge and skills. That tells your story upfront, and every point is something substantive and meaningful.
- This is minor, but the fact that the text runs all the way to the bottom of the page with no margin stood out to me. I'd reformat things so that the resume has nice, even margins all around, even if you have to trim some text to make it fit. You obviously a sense for design, judging from your website, and your resume should demonstrate that too.
- You might want to consider trimming your skills section a bit and tailoring it to each position you apply to, if you're not doing that already. The embedded C++ and IoT experience stood out to me; it's actually impressive if you're competent in both C++ and front-end JS, but if you're applying to a front-end dev position, the C++ probably isn't relevant, and I could imagine a hiring manager being slightly bemused by seeing that mix of skills.
The last thing I'll say is that I've had some ups and downs in my career and gone from being really discouraged to finding great opportunities through a combination of persistance and chance, so keep your chin up. It seems like you're approaching this with the right attitude. Good luck!
- anonXae8ip7r 4y agoTwo things I forgot to mention: 1. I encouraged you to include more non-software jobs, but you mentioned that you were concerned that your resume would be two pages long if you accurately represented your work history. One solution to that would be to only list jobs going back a certain number of years, and to omit the bullet points for the jobs with no software relevance. You don't need to list everything you've ever done, just enough to give a clear and honest picture of your recent history. 2. I'm no one special and I don't have any expertise in this area, so please take all of this advice with a grain of salt. I just figured I'd share my gut reactions in case they're helpful. You might be able to get more useful resume feedback from a professional resume review service or even an experienced recruiter.
- platevoltage 4y agoWow! Really great list of suggestions. Thank you for taking the time. Most of these are things that I have plans to address so let me go through your points. - So my reasons for not including these jobs is not out of embarrassment. It was more just trying to keep my resume concise. It appears that I have been taking the wrong approach and I am going to try to make my job history tell more of a story. - The whole being vague about my education was an experiment. I've had a lot of people tell me it was a bad move, and I am going to change it. - I don't like the summary either. I have heard suggestions to just leave it off. If you have any opinions on that, i'd like to hear. - I have been doing everything possible to shoehorn everything I can into the real estate one page offers. Perhaps I was too overzealous. This is another reason why i'm considering leaving off the summary all together. - I agree. I haven't really been tailoring my resume as much as I should. I'm thinking I need to create a few different versions. One that is front-end focused, full-stack, and maybe IoT, although i don't have much confidence I would be qualified to go into that space. - I'm happy to hear this last point. Before making this post I felt like there were insurmountable obstacles between me and the career that I want. Hearing that there are problems that are actually fixable with my strategy gives me more hope, so thanks for that.
- anonXae8ip7r 4y agoGood question about leaving off the summary. I don't feel qualified to offer an opinion one way or the other; like I said, I'm just some guy on the internet, and you should probably consult with someone with real hiring or resume-writing experience before taking any of my advice. But whatever approach you take, best of luck to you!