It could certainly be improved for reading at a glance... but, if you just pay attention to the punctuation, I kind of think inlining the "asides" there is bett

It could certainly be improved for reading at a glance... but, if you just pay attention to the punctuation, I kind of think inlining the "asides" there is better than simply trying to tree them out (which would be the fast way to fix it). Like: this is a comment, not an article... I am lying in bed (deeply wishing I were asleep) trying to quickly type a train of thought into my phone (a smaller one than I normally even use) and am even feeling forced to do so under a time pressure (as once a post gets enough comments you won't ever find anything). Often, I will even type such a comment at first and then--after posting it--take the next 20 minutes to "clean it up" into some paragraphs (but am not going to do that this time as I am hurting my elbow). You are welcome to just ignore my comment for today; and, maybe one day, I will have more than a few minutes to allocate to writing yet-another-article-on-monads that no one will want to read (and likely won't help anyone understand... see "the monad tutorial fallacy", one of my favorite articles / concepts ;P).