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Doing well on essays is part of doing well in school, and doing well in school leads to a better life! That line is particularly appalling and represents one o
by dmbass 15y ago
Doing well on essays is part of doing well in school, and doing well in school leads to a better life!
That line is particularly appalling and represents one of the many things that is wrong with our education system. That logical progression is what encourages people to cheat (plagiarism and paying for essays count).
Maybe try something more like "Getting feedback and incorporating it into your thought and work process will help you get it right the next time for your whole life."
- theorique 15y agoWhat kind of appalling? There's definitely a correlation between education level and lifetime earnings, life satisfaction, etc. (Yes, many people do fine with low levels of formal education. However, many or most of them are curious, self-educated,and self educating people with good habits.)
- jjets718 15y agoHi! Thanks for your comment! I will definitely think about changing that part of the copy. In no way is that statement meant to encourage cheating or immoral behavior, rather the goal of it is to communicate the value of the service.