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The words are too separated, both physically and stylistically. They sound and read good next to each other, and I feel they'd work better if they were more to
by euccastro 19y ago
The words are too separated, both physically and stylistically. They sound and read good next to each other, and I feel they'd work better if they were more together in both senses.
The shape of the blue Stream word suggests 'wave' rather than stream. The exaggerate bending also feels kinda cheap, like "hey, look what I can do with my new Amiga" (OK, showing my age here). I think you really want this word straight.
You may want to take a look at the antialiasing in both words; I'm no expert, but it looks kinda fishy to me, esp. since you're advertising focus.
A minor one: I think you got the kerning wrong in F o c. They are a bit too far from each other- at least the F is.
The red dot could work if you somehow harmonize its color with the 'Stream' color. Three unrelated colors is maybe too much in a logo, esp. a mostly text based one.
HTH.
- gibsonf1 19y agoI remember the amiga - a nice machine. But yes, I think it was more like "look what I can do with Photoshop" the I being me. We also got feedback from some bigger business friends that it needed to be more "serious" as the application was for serious business. Your comments are excellent, Thanks for the feedback! :)