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It may be "unnecessary" but it was logical within the flow of the paragraph as written. > It was extraordinary to watch. I remember teaching him how to drive s
by neogodless 4y ago
It may be "unnecessary" but it was logical within the flow of the paragraph as written.
> It was extraordinary to watch. I remember teaching him how to drive stick
If it's unrelated to being extraordinary to watch, which references the clicking, there should be a better segue.
Of course, the response was unnecessarily harsh!
- k_roy 4y ago> is there any reality where ticking sound with his tongue equals being able to drive stick around a paddock. I dunno. I feel like this doesn't work on this scale. I don't know if I was particularly harsh here. I just envision driving around, with the windows up (or down, doesn't really matter), and being able to click and have some kind of "vision". The image made me think it probably didn't work there, but in a different scenario, sure.