now I feel bad about editing it away :D That's the problem with 'fun', obscure words. No matter how good they sound, the piece overall sounds better without th

now I feel bad about editing it away :D That's the problem with 'fun', obscure words. No matter how good they sound, the piece overall sounds better without them --- an instance (by no means the only) of the well-worn truism 'kill your darlings'. Thinking about this specific instance carefully. There's a sort of tipping point and if words are on the too-fancy side of it, they (as it were) cost too much to bring in a good return-on-investment. Better to sort of moneyball the smaller words, getting them 'cheap', and in quantity, to produce whatever overall effect you like. Don't carve boulders, shape concrete.