I guess. If the central claim of the essay is that it really genuinely takes three pages to explain what the passive voice is. On the other hand, sections 2 th

I guess. If the central claim of the essay is that it really genuinely takes three pages to explain what the passive voice is. On the other hand, sections 2 through 7 of the article really just belabor the same point made in section 1. If I just say "wow, 7 sections!" and stop reading, then, sure, it looks like the concept really is very difficult to explain. But when I read all those sections, I don't feel convinced anymore.