The wording part is my fault - I didn't think about on vs in, in my mind it would be on the walls and stuff / kitchen is the insides of the room - but I can see

The wording part is my fault - I didn't think about on vs in, in my mind it would be on the walls and stuff / kitchen is the insides of the room - but I can see how that's maybe not appropriate. The exact quote is : >But then she noticed something even stranger - her kitchen was covered in a thick layer of butter. vs >Butter went everywhere! On the ceiling, on the floor, on the refrigerator, on the toaster Your phrasing sounds like something I'd read to my son and I could see him repeating all the items and adding some of his own.