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Can tell it was written by ChatGPT. Has that kind of verboseness to it, can't quite put my finger on.

danielcorin 4y ago
I was going for more of a kid's book tone but I think I hadn't quite learned enough about the depth and nuance you can introduce into the output via prompting. In retrospect now, I agree it has that generic-AI tone.
- trmsw 4y ago
  The "all sorts of other whimsical attractions" is especially bad.
  - danielcorin 4y ago
    Absolutely. This was recycled almost directly from some of the prompt material I gave while refining. I've learned more about "prompt engineering" (as it seems to be called) since and think it would be relatively easy to smooth these edges out. Edit: typo
    - trmsw 4y ago
      This reminded me of the rules for fiction in Flaubert's Parrot. They don't include any mention of whimsy, in fact, but it was fun rereading them.
c7b 4y ago
I find that Midjourney tends to have its own characteristic touch as well. It's great if you like it, but it can be tricky if you want something different. I've found StableDiffusion to be a bit more versatile, even though it's harder to get a similar level of artistic quality.
Devasta 4y ago
But a kid won't be able to, and if they can they won't be able to articulate whats wrong with it. From the perspective of anyone going into AI, that makes children the perfect target for the mass produced blended garbage that AI generates.
- stagas 4y ago
  What elevates a human story higher than ChatGPT's? Do our brains have some hidden trascendental property that LLMs can never get to? Or is it simply our own biases once we learn that this is the product of an algorithm rather than human-made?
  - adamauckland 4y ago
    Unpredictability. ChatGPT writes stories like children do. Very wordy and boring. Then this happened then that happened. Interesting stories have a set up and when you think you know what's going on, they switch, otherwise it's not a story, just narration. The trick is those bait and switch differ culturally, depending on language of the reader, even the tastes of the reader, otherwise you don't get that "I was NOT expecting that" joy.
  - Devasta 4y ago
    Why are you asking me this when you could be asking ChatGPT? This is a serious question.

I was going for more of a kid's book tone but I think I hadn't quite learned enough about the depth and nuance you can introduce into the output via prompting. In retrospect now, I agree it has that generic-AI tone.

trmsw 4y ago
The "all sorts of other whimsical attractions" is especially bad.
- danielcorin 4y ago
  Absolutely. This was recycled almost directly from some of the prompt material I gave while refining. I've learned more about "prompt engineering" (as it seems to be called) since and think it would be relatively easy to smooth these edges out. Edit: typo
  - trmsw 4y ago
    This reminded me of the rules for fiction in Flaubert's Parrot. They don't include any mention of whimsy, in fact, but it was fun rereading them.

c7b 4y ago

I find that Midjourney tends to have its own characteristic touch as well. It's great if you like it, but it can be tricky if you want something different. I've found StableDiffusion to be a bit more versatile, even though it's harder to get a similar level of artistic quality.

Devasta 4y ago

But a kid won't be able to, and if they can they won't be able to articulate whats wrong with it. From the perspective of anyone going into AI, that makes children the perfect target for the mass produced blended garbage that AI generates.

stagas 4y ago
What elevates a human story higher than ChatGPT's? Do our brains have some hidden trascendental property that LLMs can never get to? Or is it simply our own biases once we learn that this is the product of an algorithm rather than human-made?
- adamauckland 4y ago
  Unpredictability. ChatGPT writes stories like children do. Very wordy and boring. Then this happened then that happened. Interesting stories have a set up and when you think you know what's going on, they switch, otherwise it's not a story, just narration. The trick is those bait and switch differ culturally, depending on language of the reader, even the tastes of the reader, otherwise you don't get that "I was NOT expecting that" joy.
- Devasta 4y ago
  Why are you asking me this when you could be asking ChatGPT? This is a serious question.