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Looks good - My comments are more a matter of style, so take with a pinch of salt... 1. I like the logo, but I don't like it against the blue. It washes out th
by jwilliams 18y ago
Looks good - My comments are more a matter of style, so take with a pinch of salt...
1. I like the logo, but I don't like it against the blue. It washes out the colors. I'd change the background to something more complimentary - or maybe instead of a drop shadow a white glow would work (not sure without seeing it :)
2. I don't like the byline "Freedom from Coffee and Copies". You'll turn off the set: "I had the best times fetching coffee" and "I show them the ropes to X, why shouldn't they get me coffee" and "If they can't be bothered getting coffee, they aren't motivated enough to be an intern at supercompany Y"... etc... etc... This is even if they have a great position - people can be stubborn on principle. I'd save it as a byline for the "Interns" section.
3. I initially didn't like the name, which is never really a big deal, but I liked it when I saw the "you-intern" blue/red logo. You could also emphasize the three colors if you went to "you-in-tern" - which is also a neat play on words.
Again, all just style. Good luck.