If you don't mind some feedback... Instead of harshing on the OP, making him find your email, and beg for help, don't you think a more proactive approach would

If you don't mind some feedback... Instead of harshing on the OP, making him find your email, and beg for help, don't you think a more proactive approach would be more valuable to the conversation? Like the following, for instance. - "As a copywriter, I see quite a few common mistakes on your landing page. I took a few minutes and made a first pass at cleaning it up. (Find a before/after article on my blog here: [link] ) I'm happy to help you improve your (or any HNer's) site copy. Drop me a line to discuss. Email's in my profile" - This more proactive approach is far more likely to actually help someone. Based on others who have offered non-programming services/advice on HN, it seems likely to lead to some freelance/consulting work should you desire some. Make it clear that you only spent 5/10/15 minutes on your draft. That sets expectations about quality, while still showing people how much better things could be with help from a real copywriter. Food for thought.