For those reading comments first the story starts in the third paragraph. It could only me but the way it is written obstructs the consumption of the content.

For those reading comments first the story starts in the third paragraph. It could only me but the way it is written obstructs the consumption of the content. Two long paragraph went on before started to talk about the actual topic, after elaborating about how much the author worked and work on it and what is not going to talk about in a stage entertainer kind of inflated manner (the comment "I am not going to waste your time" is ironic then). It kind of derails the focus from the content in my opinion. Edit: the story is pretty interesting btw.