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Look, I don't disagree with the premise, but this needs a hell of a lot of proofreading. What even is this sentence? > This other tweet, emerged in the thread
by floren 4y ago
Look, I don't disagree with the premise, but this needs a hell of a lot of proofreading. What even is this sentence?
> This other tweet, emerged in the thread of the aforementioned, illustrates it perfectly: if Bezos was able to get to where he is today, it is due, in part, to the fact that his parents gave him more than $ 240,000 dollars to prevent his idea, Amazon, will fail.
Click through the site, it's fucking bizarre, like a showcase for "here's the kinds of blogspam I can write for your needs!"
- aoetalks 4y agoI read this sentence like 5 times trying to make sense of it. Glad it wasn’t me.
- superchroma 4y agoIt suffers from overuse of commas which tends to be because the author uses them to communicate how they read it in their head (particularly how they paused on beats whilst reading for effect). Obviously there's an error at the end ("will fail" should be "from failing"). It suggests to me an author who is not experienced at writing, quote possibly due to having English as a second language.