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> ChatGPT offers the structure of an explanation, but falls into tautologies and truisms Proofreading Text for English Can you proofread the following text?
by ildon 4y ago
> ChatGPT offers the structure of an explanation, but falls into tautologies and truisms
Proofreading Text for English
Can you proofread the following text?
Sure, here is your text with some suggested edits and comments:
"The cat sat on the mat. It was a warm day, and the sun was shining through the window. The cat closed it's eyes and basked in the warm rays. It was so relaxed that it fell asleep, dreaming of chasing mice and lounging in the sun.
"It's" should be "its" (possessive form of "it")
Consider using a comma after "warm day" for clarity
Consider using a comma after "sun" for clarity
Consider using a comma after "eyes" for clarity
"basked" is past tense, so "was so relaxed" should also be past tense (e.g. "it was so relaxed")
Consider using a comma after "sun" for clarity
"dreaming of chasing mice and lounging in the sun" is a present participle phrase that describes the cat's state while it was asleep, so it should be set off with commas (e.g. "it fell asleep, dreaming of chasing mice and lounging in the sun.")
Here is the revised text with the suggested changes applied:
The cat sat on the mat. It was a warm day, and the sun was shining through the window. The cat closed its eyes and basked in the warm rays. It was so relaxed that it fell asleep, dreaming of chasing mice and lounging in the sun."
Proofread the following text: As a University professor, having reviewed thousands of exams over more than a decade, in my experience this same exact criticism could be applied to many human students. A non negligible percentage of students provide answers that are tautological, or at best answers that merely restate what someone else has written, without really grasping the meaning of it. The way I see it is that we know not enough about how we, humans, process information in our brains to make logical thoughts, to rule out that the current state of the art AI is capable of the same. It seems to me that the current state of the art AI models are getting closer to humans, sometimes mimicking the smarter ones, some others the less smart ones.
Here is your text with some suggested edits and comments:
"As a university professor who has reviewed thousands of exams over more than a decade, I have found in my experience that this same criticism could be applied to many human students.
A non-negligible percentage of students provide tautological answers, or at best, answers that merely restate what someone else has written without really grasping the meaning.
From my perspective, we do not yet know enough about how our brains process information and form logical thoughts to rule out the possibility that current state-of-the-art AI is capable of doing the same.
It seems to me that current state-of-the-art AI models are getting closer to humans, sometimes mimicking the smarter ones and other times the less intelligent ones.