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lol Honestly i think the 2019 grand winner is the best still >2019 Grand Prize >Space Fleet Commander Brad Brad sat in silence, surrounded by a slowly dissip
by senectus1 4y ago
lol
Honestly i think the 2019 grand winner is the best still
>2019 Grand Prize
>Space Fleet Commander Brad Brad sat in silence, surrounded by a slowly dissipating cloud of smoke, maintaining the same forlorn frown that had been fixed upon his face since he’d accidentally destroyed the phenomenon known as time, thirteen inches ago.
- DiabloD3 4y agoThat is a work of art.
- arethuza 4y agoDoes that qualify as a (very) short story?
- sph 4y agoI somehow missed he's called Brad Brad. More crap to add to the steaming pile this sentence is. Absolutely masterful.
- SOLAR_FIELDS 4y agoThe half assed alliteration adds an aspect of joy to the already audacious anecdote
- otikik 4y agoBrad Brad. What a lad. It can’t be that bad.
- pschuegr 4y agoIt can't be that bad bad.
- mirekrusin 4y agoReads like opening to Stanislaw Lem's short.
- pje 4y agoTotally disagree! The structure is clunky, but the payoff at the end is actually really good! Also the dumbness of the name is funny enough to work in the right context. With a little bit of editing this would make a great piece of flash sci-fi on something like nanoism. https://twitter.com/nanoism https://twitter.com/nanoism
- muro 4y agoHow can the smoke slowly dissipate?