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Please, shorten your sentences. Check out "On Writing Well" by Zinsser.
by lallysingh 4y ago
Please, shorten your sentences. Check out "On Writing Well" by Zinsser.
- nilespotter 4y agoNobody asked but we've all noted, you have trouble with reading comprehension. I read the parent comment easily and found the commas helpful.
- acomms 4y agoWhile a bit rude, they aren't wrong. The referenced text is grammatically correct, but poorly structured - making it more difficult to read.