> Or maybe he is just describing what a Hush Puppy shoe is To me, this reiterates the point. Perhaps he is just describing a Hush Puppy shoe, and it's just the

> Or maybe he is just describing what a Hush Puppy shoe is To me, this reiterates the point. Perhaps he is just describing a Hush Puppy shoe, and it's just the way his mind chooses to present that information. The same information packaged in other ways won't be as interesting to read, won't feel as compelling, forces the reader to create their own narrative. Whether this is a subconscious outcome and the words just flow or a carefully calculated outcome with much poring over the sentence structure doesn't much matter. What matters is that people eat it up, and there is most likely something to learn from that.