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The author used the word jawn/"jawnz" 3 times in a relatively short article. I really cannot get past that.
by standardly 4y ago
The author used the word jawn/"jawnz" 3 times in a relatively short article. I really cannot get past that.
- ycombinete 4y agoThere is a lot that I can’t get past in this, otherwise well written and interesting article, article. - Spelling “your” as “yr” - “people” as “ppl” - “sh*t” all over the place (“Have you clocked these s*ts??”) - using ampersands in the middle of the article - “regs-painted” Etc.
- 3np 4y ago> - “sh*t” all over the place (“Have you clocked these s*ts??”) I find this particularly distracting and annoying. Either write out "shit" or just use a different word. "Censoring" your own text like this comes off as an attempt at being edgy. > this strikes us as a hedged, half-stepping, and underhandedly infantilizing approach to color design Replace "color design" with "writing" and it becomes self-referential.