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A very minor thing, but I find it difficult to read the text quickly. I think the problem is best summed up as, "When in doubt, capitalise everything.". Examp
by buro9 15y ago
A very minor thing, but I find it difficult to read the text quickly.
I think the problem is best summed up as, "When in doubt, capitalise everything.".
Example: "The Simple & Snappy Email Ticketing Software that doesn't kill Your Human Face".
Would be better as: "The simple & snappy email ticketing software that doesn't kill your human face".
Though I'd also change the phrase "kill your human face" to something that sounds less like a slasher movie.
On capitalisation: If it's not a name, trademark, acronym or the first word in a sentence, then don't capitalise it.
But if you are going to capitalise every word in a sentence, be consistent: : "Real-Time Email Importing", is one title, and another title just above is ,"Stay in the loop".
Very minor, but when you have a well designed page it's a shame that the copy is the weak point.
- rbrcurtis 15y agoAgreed. I think the italics of "The Simple & Snappy Email Ticketing Software that doesn't kill Your Human Face" isn't extremely legible, causing my eyes to jump right over it, so I didn't pick up on what was being sold right away.