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1. Your tag line could be shorter. What about instead of "Get SupportBee - The Simple & Snappy Email Ticketing Software that doesn't kill Your Human Face" rathe
by rezrovs 15y ago
1. Your tag line could be shorter. What about instead of "Get SupportBee - The Simple & Snappy Email Ticketing Software that doesn't kill Your Human Face" rather using "Get SupportBee - The Simple & Snappy Email Ticketing Software".
2. The focus on not killing your human face sounds wrong. If you turned the sentence around it would come across as more positive - "Promote your human face" perhaps?
- prateekdayal 15y agoThanks. We will split test and see which one does better. A lot of the messaging is trying out tips from CopyHackers - http://www.copyhackers.com http://www.copyhackers.com and so may be a little too edgy.