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Nice concept. I really liked the beginning, but it comes a bit unglued at the end, too much explaining and not enough showing.
by soperj 4y ago
Nice concept. I really liked the beginning, but it comes a bit unglued at the end, too much explaining and not enough showing.
- user052919 4y agoYou know, someone else gave me similar feedback as well. I'm kind of reluctant to make it longer, but might be a better story if it is. Like: maybe have something about the government responses to it and what happens, etc, work some of the explanations in there. Going to keep this in mind, appreciate it!