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To me personally, your product description here at HN (on top of this page) is more to the point than the copy on the homepage!
by vladstudio 4y ago
To me personally, your product description here at HN (on top of this page) is more to the point than the copy on the homepage!
- rglover 4y agoI agree. That should be the "pitch" in the marketing copy. Something like "I got frustrated with Trello, Asana, etc. so I decided to fix it" and build the narrative from there. To the OP: this is extremely well done. Congrats on launching. Love the design and the packaging.
- tonypham 4y agoThanks for sharing your thoughts and feedback. I must admit that we're not good at copywriting. I'm so happy that I received a lot of great ideas from the comments here.
- tonypham 4y agoThanks for your feedback. Probably on our website, we're trying to sound "smart" with fancy words. We'll work on the copy to make it more clear.
- EugeneOZ 4y agoAnd for me it's quite the contrary - the description on HN says nothing about how it actually works, it looks just like whining and flaming and bragging.