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Recommendation: Change "Schedule gifts to be sent to the females in your life" to "Schedule gifts to be sent to the women in your life." "Females" sounds like
by jawns 15y ago
Recommendation: Change "Schedule gifts to be sent to the females in your life" to "Schedule gifts to be sent to the women in your life."
"Females" sounds like cop-speak.
- gcl2 15y agoOr even more softer/friendlier sounding "Schedule gifts for women" (gifts are usually sent or given and can be assumed as so, and it's assumed they are for women in your life and not random women in the universe).
- spontaneus 15y agoI'm a/b testing a few of these. I'll add your suggestions to the mix.