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What is the premise of this first paragraph, why do people feel like they need to introduce this fluff: > "Sitting on the Marine Atlantic ferry, I’m watching
by gavinray 4y ago
What is the premise of this first paragraph, why do people feel like they need to introduce this fluff:
> "Sitting on the Marine Atlantic ferry, I’m watching the Newfoundland skyline disappear on the horizon as I type away. I see the rocking of the ocean waves, inhale its salty breeze, feel and hear the buzz of the ship’s rumbling engine. I try to focus on writing this sentence, but my eyes hopefully scan the ocean for a rogue, splashing whale."
Nice, you took a boat once and you wanted to see some whales, not what I came here for.