I don’t think that this exposition is any more or less clear than any number of the same in any number of books. Sure, if you just read a 100 word summary, it s

I don’t think that this exposition is any more or less clear than any number of the same in any number of books. Sure, if you just read a 100 word summary, it sounds like the quoted example of “BS”, but any reasonable text also provides an explanation that’s essentially the same thing as the extended explanation given by the author.