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Sorry for the critique on form instead of content but man, this is hard to read. Putting periods where commas belong or where a sentence should be rewritten for
by tines 4y ago
Sorry for the critique on form instead of content but man, this is hard to read. Putting periods where commas belong or where a sentence should be rewritten for clarity is an obstacle to easy comprehension.
- philipwhiuk 4y agoIndeed - starting every sentence with a conjunction is very jarring.
- theta_d 4y agoWas this written by AI? I stopped after the second paragraph. Too much cognitive load.
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- tiahura 4y agoNot to mention the sentence fragments.
- cryptoanon 4y agoWow. I was wondering why I had such a hard time reading this. Now that you say it, you’re spot on – it’s the text equivalent of stop and go traffic.
- anigbrowl 4y agoIt's the confluence of sales and religion. With these rhetorical tools, everything is a sales pitch. And when everything is a pitch, all conversation is commerce. A new world. A world where hype becomes real and reality is your plaything. We call it Xchange. Xchange your reality. [applause.flac loop=1000]