The pop-culture whimsy is the major part of your comment. You may have some interesting ideas on how the politics would play out, but the reader has to decode t

The pop-culture whimsy is the major part of your comment. You may have some interesting ideas on how the politics would play out, but the reader has to decode them from the HP framing. Maybe try just giving the political analysis straight and giving a quick summary of the LHC report.