I read all of this but had the uncanny feeling that it could have been said in about 10% of the space. Lots of waffle and fluff. Good points though ... I think?

I read all of this but had the uncanny feeling that it could have been said in about 10% of the space. Lots of waffle and fluff. Good points though ... I think? I can't hardly even remember what page 1 was about.