Yeah, I think you just need to sit down and figure out who you're really writing it for. When I wrote LPTHW I had three or four actual people in mind and I kep

Yeah, I think you just need to sit down and figure out who you're really writing it for. When I wrote LPTHW I had three or four actual people in mind and I kept laser focus on making it a book they could learn from. They weren't programmers at all, so that helped me make the book work for people who can't code at all. Figure out who it's for, then what you want them to be able to do when they're done, then focus on that. If the stuff you're writing doesn't help the target reader accomplish what you want then cut it. Anyway, keep writing it and I'm following you on twitter so bug me when you got something you want me to read.