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This has to be one of the most poorly structured pieces of writing I've seen in a while. It's way too verbose, and on the one hand there are separate sections l
by SargeDebian 4y ago
This has to be one of the most poorly structured pieces of writing I've seen in a while. It's way too verbose, and on the one hand there are separate sections like:
* Getting a flash drive
* Formatting a flash drive (which includes a subsection on not formatting it but buying one that's already formatted instead, while there was a separate section just before this one on buying a drive)
* Waiting for a file to download
At the same time downloading both Wikipedia and Kiwix are in the same section. Then, installing Kiwix is in a section called "You're done" which isn't next to the section on downloading Kiwix.
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