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Agree, the writing seems off as an American, and it seems there are some comma splices. A good editor will tighten up the writing.
by RcouF1uZ4gsC 4y ago
Agree, the writing seems off as an American, and it seems there are some comma splices. A good editor will tighten up the writing.
- mosburger 4y agoalso very weird use of French-style « guillemet » quotation marks? (not weird because they're guillemets, just kinda weird because they're in an English language article and being used for emphasis instead of quotations)