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SECRET.
W.P.(G)(40) 211. COPY No. 51
9th AUGUST, 1940,
WAR CABINET.
BREVITY.
Memorandum by the Prime Minister.
To do our work, we all have to read a mass of papers.
Nearly all of them are far too long. This wastes time,
while energy hes to be spent in looking for the essential
points,
I ask my colleagues and their staffs to see to it
that their Reports are shorter.
(i) The aim should be Reports which set out
the main points in a series of short, crisp
paragraphs.
(ii) If a Report relies on detailed analysis
of some complicated factors, or on statistics,
these should be set out in an Appendix.
(iii) Often the occasion is best met by submitting
not a full-dress Report, but an Aide-memoire
consisting of headings only, which can be
expanded orally if needed,
(iv) Let us have an end of such phrases as these:
"It is also of importance to bear in mind
the following considerations......", or
"Consideration should be given to the
possibility of carrying into effect.....".
Most of these woolly phrases are mere padding, which
can be left out altogether, or replaced by a
single word. Let us not shrink from using
the short expressive phrase, even if it is
conversational.
Reports drawn up on the lines I propose may at first seem
rough as compared with the flat surface of officialese jargon.
But the saving in time will be great, while the discipline of
setting out the real points concisely will prove an aid to
clearer thinking.
W.S.C,
10, Downing Street.
9TH AUGUST, 1940.