> I strongly dislike the leading purple prose. It's bad writing, and doesn't make the case > Providence is a health giant whose anchor is a network of Catholic

> I strongly dislike the leading purple prose. It's bad writing, and doesn't make the case > Providence is a health giant whose anchor is a network of Catholic hospitals. They colluded with McKinsey to steal from their poorest patients, by deceiving them about their eligibility for free care, saddling poor, sick people with crushing debts: This part? Does not seem matches your "equally moralizing" writing.